Thảo luận:Đào Phong Lan

Improvements have been made on the links and details

Hi, thank you for your feedback to my first post. I have realized that the links I embedded need improvement so I have done so. I have also improved on the edits of the details quoting the most reliable sources (main stream media; HCMC Association of Writers, Vietnam Association of Musicians) and have added details to the best of my knowledge.

If there is any other change required, please kindly let me know. Thank you! – Harrynguyenbui (thảo luận) 05:48, ngày 27 tháng 11 năm 2022 (UTC)